Black Poetry : Eternity

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From the day we met
    You made me forget
    All the pain I've had in past
    I realize to my surprise
    This love is the kind to last
    You've turned my head
    With the things you've said
    How was I to stand tall and not fall
    You bring out the best in me
    I want to give you my all
    Today, Tomorrow, and Everyday
    I'll express my love every possible way
    Into my life I welcome you
    To start our journey without further adue
    I'm sure it's you I love without a doubt
    You are the missing half I can't live without
    My completion is what I want you to be
    So please be mine for eternity


    :blowkiss: :hearts2: :kiss2: :luvv: ​
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    now that is so sweet, so humble.....i just felt a breeze reading it....wow...to find that kind of love and devotion must be nice...

    nice flow, asimplepoet.....
     
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    Sounds like love, pure and simple. Very sweet read.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warmth of heart and love on the rise this was too sweet...
     
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    Thank you all for the love
     
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    This was indeed lovely and beautiful.
     
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