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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The
    long
    stretch of time
    cultivates a sor of
    purity
    that releases a timeless
    essence that
    edifies my sinking
    soul.
    In your eternity I can't help but
    evolve into
    the entity filled
    so completely with
    something akin to fever.
    You become my lever, my love,
    my eternity.

    In you,
    I become a maelstrom
    of emotions and
    electrical
    surges of feeling
    that compells me to
    loose myself deeply
    into your purity.
    I sink lower and deeper into
    your satin-like eternity.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "HyeKlass Publishing"
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    That was beautiful.
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much love. I appreciate it.
     
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    This had such an easy rhythm to it, to compliment the words, continue to write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off the hook this was awesome sweet flowing poet
     
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    love it :D
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your special brand of love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome u bring light to the room
     
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    No problem pa.
     
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