Black Poetry : Drifting

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drifting

    Blonde think I’m James bond had to add that to my game
    Rhyme hot like soup and tight like a knot with loops got
    Plots like troops try take over become a great soldier hot
    In rap, ballistics perk like artistic work got a design on doors
    While fine metaphors pours like water hurting leaving sores
    Put knowledge firm in mind they must learn to rhyme well
    Keeap a town alert because I lay groundwork all around hell
    These clowns and jerks try bring me down, when it cum to
    Girls my kiss could place lace into a river of wetness some true
    Love, huntfor quotes right in front of folks so I can give a speech
    And the words live to reach out of towners bring it raw as a peach
    When it comes to smoking my brother don’t but my mother want
    A pack of cigars and they’ll leave big scars in her lungs so I wan’t
    Buy them, don’t go around campfires because vampires feed at
    Night one bit my neck became a legit wreck started to have need that
    Made me drink blood could no longer think as a thug my mind
    Couldn’t link to love no longer write great art drove a stake divine
    Through my own heart afterwards a strong start for freedom the cross
    Was my enemy as I crossed the vicinity leaving victims body tossed
    And drained of blood
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word !!!! ya spitting fire here .....
     
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    thanks rich for the props
     
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    I liked the way one concept led into the next here rhymebad.
     
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