Black Poetry : DRIFTING

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DRIFTING

    Down river, bound to shiver, from the cold air this whole
    Affair of fishing is twisting my thoughts bait hook bold
    Take a fake look into my soul my reflection is like a rejection
    On the water’s surface, mosquitoes are like torpedoes need protection
    They aim at my skin rub on lotions have a love for oceans
    And streams, emotions steams like anxiety potions
    Which drown thinking I’m down and sinking need a lifeguard
    Strife hard try swim through it so I take the route of a trout scarred
    On my journey to eternity a turtle try hurdle to eat me but missed
    Stay pushed as rap sharks lay in ambush to open fire with
    Smoking desire to kill me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wordz ......poetically maddness
    tyte scribe MADDRAPPER
     
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    oh i like this..tight my brother
     
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    Nice Mad.. tight flow
    " Emotions steams like anxiety potions "
     
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    MADDABSTRACT.

    Peace.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was raw. I like this.
     
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