Quiet Poetry Lounge : Dream( my fourth and last post for the week so u better read)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Aug 25, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Once dreamed a dream
    a dream, such a dream
    All I saw was beautifull
    so perfect to me
    It seemed as though the very air sung to me
    The trees waved and the sun winked
    The moon usually solemn, smiled at me I think

    I walked through this garden
    Excuisite, and regarded
    As a king by all of existance
    Fear and insecurity didn't exist within
    Such things are unknown in a dream

    If I grew weary
    I would lean back to slumber atop clouds
    In gods embrace
    Angels caressing my face
    Such joy has no place
    In reality
    The realization of this awoke me
    from this, a
    wonderful dream

    What agony
    What cruelty
    To have all your hopes realized
    To experience happiness,contentment and paradise
    To bath within sunshine
    Only to awake into the deepest of night
    A night lacking even the moons light
    With only a memory
    Faint and vague
    A mental aftertaste of
    A dream

    :cry:
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    Waddup doe....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ! some dream to scream about .
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feelin, sometimes it sucks waking up to reality. Nice poem!
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah reality can be a hard brick wall comin down on us when it compares to our dreams...but then again...i think that it's dreams that makes reality bearable, cuz without dreams i would have nothing to hope for
    :bam:

    Dug the vibe...keep the flow goin poet
     
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