Black Poetry : before you step to me

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  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk i heard was cheap
    and actions-yes- they do speak louder than words
    So tell me
    do your actions speak louder than your words
    or are you just trying to run game on me so you can possibly enter me and get a peice of me.

    Boy if you cant get passed it-
    the assests that i was blessed with then there is no need for us to associate.
    Because your lust for whats between my thighs
    compares nothing to whats behind my eyes.
    So please take off those soulful peice and chains
    and start going by your real name
    not the one you got shootin dice
    but the one your momma chose at the beginning of your life.

    And maybe i would give you a chance if
    you would stop confusing your manhood with the
    size of your stick or the baggets aroud your wrist.
    Running from block to block hustlin rock to rock,
    boy you need to get off them streets and start making money the american way because classy is what i visualize my husband to be so get your act right BEFORE STEPPING TO ME!!!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everytime i step
    I STEP CORRECT
    mental attire in full effect
    fat bank...fresh gear
    ain't nothing new
    heartbeat bubbling
    as i step to you

    as a child, i played games
    that's what children do
    visualize that i'm a man
    and my words are true.

    PROPER AND CORRECT
    that's what real men do.

    knock...knock

    you gon' let me in or what?:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED may I

    welcome thee unto Destee's before i step to thee
    i wonna openly welcome thee within family & friends
    dis was tyght as u know bring on da poetic flow
    welcome welcome welcome !!!!:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read! And I welcome you too!
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ICandi

    Sis ... they can't help it ... Candi dripp'n wit sweetness ...
    make'n their mouth water ... they wanna come correct ...
    but just scared you won't let 'em holla ...

    :)

    me and my poetry ... kinda sad ... which makes me more glad

    that you're here! :)

    Thanks for joining us and please make yourself at home!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight read indeed!!
    Welcome and lemme tell you, I feel you.
    Eternal
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um i'm feeling ya

    dssnY
     
  8. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    Thank you for all the compliments
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... this is good...very nice, wonderful
    Peace
     
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