Black Poetry : A few weeks left before the Big step.....

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i gave up my rent...
    i am perplexed...
    cause it all goes so fast......


    mom is already here....
    the last boxes ar near....
    i,m half gadabout..
    half rooted..
    there is a furore..
    and a header.....
    and a little fear...
    its so near...
    i know...
    god is here...



    there is no postponement ...

    the movers are comming in a few ours and minuts...


    i,m in it...

    its realy happening....


    my last week at work at the daycare centers......
    the little ones aksing me do i come back..."'i,m gonna miss you"'
    and my heart breaks...
    i feel what i have to leave behind and i wonder...



    will it all be worth.........





    but than again....





    if i dont go......
    i will never know......












    and i still have to ....








    find...








    my ...







    home....
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    nice capture...aurora....beautiful capture of the spirit of leaving it behind....I do love how you cared for the feelings of the kids at the center......a amazing write....

    move forward without fear...I sense you will do fine.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful as u move on yet leaving warmth behind to remember
    and savor in .......
     
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