Black Poetry : A Black Woman In Love.............A PropheticNsyght and Dior Robynsonne Collab

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~**Inspired by the wonderful piece written by SAGE and WATZ. Much love to you two.



    I

    A black woman in love.
    Autumn leaves and freshly, sweet winter breezes flow.
    The Earth sings in harmony and
    She bathes in melody.
    Love's potency,
    redefines what deep emotion is and what one can expect.
    Impossibilities become her realities and the sacred sanctity
    of what love is, drown's her in it's murky sea.
    She sits at the natural bar, drinking a large glass of passion and
    yearning. The sunshine bathes her in a golden glow and
    She smokes a pack of amorous dipped camels and looses herself inside of this hazy flow.

    II

    A Black Woman In love.
    Act Two, Scene Three.
    She steps on a stage and before an audience on pure emotion she plays the part so well that she becomes submerged.
    Identity is lost and she becomes Love.
    The moonlight, peeping thru her sultry soul causes her sweet and soul-stirring orgasms and heart-stopping ejaculations of undecisive preportions.
    She
    looses
    touch
    with
    reality
    like
    walking
    down
    a staircase in the middle of the earth. In her she hears the transformation before she can feel it.
    The heat of pure, raw and unrefined love assaults her inwardly,
    consuming her mortal and spirital being.
    Encased in a fire of undiluted passion she gives herself freely and easy
    a
    pure
    breeze
    of
    a *
    i*
    r*
    Y* love and affection.


    III

    A Black Woman In Love.
    Flows desperately into the barren reaches of her soul,
    Like the life-giving Nile; innundating her dry spirit and reviving life where none existed.
    Her terrain sprouts and every drop of love takes root and she soon looses herself in the deep and tumultuous spiral of this emotion.
    Moon-light and Sunshine wrap themselves around her caressing her interior and illuminating her exterior.
    She steps into her niche as Queen of Ancient Kush and prepares to disappear into her night mood.
    She breaths within the echo and a sound is retrieved.
    Love strums the gilded strings of her heart and she sings.


    IV

    A Black Woman In Love.
    Transcends the normal barriers of space and time.
    She hears, feels and tastes the joy, pleasure, musicality, rhythm, rhyme and song of Love.
    She seemingly
    S~

    W~

    A~

    Y~

    S~
    feeling herself as she finally looses herself in the strange and haunting rhapsody of love.
    A Black Woman In Love realizes quickly that she is and will be now and forever complete with her Nubian King.
    She dresses in her new title and bathes in the reality.
    A Black Woman In Love.



    ~Copyright
    The Year of the Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 15th day.
    in conjunction with
    "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~*Dior Robynsonne and ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My...

    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:

    I'll be back...*whew*...you've inspired me...lol...wow
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's a recap...on my favorite parts of this...(taking deep breaths...regaining composure)....

    yeah...that was me, lol...


    OOOOOOOOOOOO...K :blush:



    Consider me...~~~~Officially Impressed~~~~~
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thank you so much Angelic. I'm so glad you could appreciate this. I'm looking forward to your work as well and I would love to do a collab with you if your up to it.
    Get back to me when you can.
     
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    :bowdown: now THAT'S what I call a response!!!! lovely job ladies
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks SwtT! Much love. Unfortunately Dior and I are Men LOL*smile*
     
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    ROFL....my bad...:blush:..
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nah, your good ma. Its all good :lol: :read: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: One love.
     
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    very well done u two
     
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    WOW!!!!
    First of all let me say that I feel honored to be included in something that inspired the two of you so. As I read this, I was inundated with feelings of gentle breezes and earthy textures, with a rapture pouring forth. This was just wonderful. Thank you.
     
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