Black Poetry : Wish

[msluciousb]

What an awe inspiring piece!

Originally posted by Kitana
poetic mind..

this here is so sweet....

haven't we all stood at some time and wished on a star..
sometimes for the unreachable, sometimes for the impossible, but we wish anyway....and it makes us feel so good...

K

Exceptionally well written, good form and content, and the symmetry is unique! Keep up the good work! Loving it!
MsLB

 

[Poetic Mind]

thank you

lol thank you all for taking the time and read my poem ..i appreciate it

 

[$$RICH$$]

YA MOST WELCOME

POETICALLY .............. THANK U 4 SHARING WIT US
AND I BE WISHING UPON DA STAR U KEEP FLOWING
AND SHARING YO INNER THOUGHTS OF YA PEN !

 

[Poetic Mind]

for ome reasn i loved that comment thank you and i will... i'll be wishing you the best....oops i already have