Black Poetry : Wish

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  1. Poetic Mind

    Poetic Mind Member MEMBER

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    I Looked up to the stars
    there's something shining bright.
    I wish i could wish my 1st wish tonight.
    The wish that would bring the most marvelous things.
    one of them would be for you to come and look
    up the stars and wish with me..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes

    star bright star night
    wishing the two upon dis night
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    may I say.....

    I love this?

    I do.....

    thank you

    a
     
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    Poetic Mind Member MEMBER

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    lol

    thank you very much i appreciate it
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic mind..

    this here is so sweet....

    haven't we all stood at some time and wished on a star..
    sometimes for the unreachable, sometimes for the impossible, but we wish anyway....and it makes us feel so good...

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What an awe inspiring piece!

    Exceptionally well written, good form and content, and the symmetry is unique! Keep up the good work! Loving it!
    MsLB
     
  7. Poetic Mind

    Poetic Mind Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    lol thank you all for taking the time and read my poem ..i appreciate it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA MOST WELCOME

    POETICALLY .............. THANK U 4 SHARING WIT US
    AND I BE WISHING UPON DA STAR U KEEP FLOWING
    AND SHARING YO INNER THOUGHTS OF YA PEN !:D
     
  9. Poetic Mind

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    for ome reasn i loved that comment thank you and i will... i'll be wishing you the best....oops i already have
     
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