Black Poetry : Whisper

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whisper

    The feel of your breath on my neck sends chills down my spine like the cool trickle of rain.
    I want to hear you whisper my name.
    One more time I need to hear you call my name.
    I miss the feel of the love that you gave over and over with out question. How is it that you can know what I need when I need it and how I need it.
    I want to hear you whisper my name.
    One more time I need to hear you call my name.
    How sweet the kisses that trail down my spine and back up to just the right spot that makes me suck in a quick breath and release a jagged breath all at the same time.
    My body responds to your every move.
    I need to feel you one more time to let me know that you love me and want me and need me.
    I want to hear you whisper my name.

    To whisper I Love you again.

    As I whisper the same.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow
    this is a lovely flow
    my goodness
    nice drop
    lovely indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You certainly have a flair for putting the reader in the moment. Very nice.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all. I am glad that you all are enjoying my work.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *smile*

    very nice floE
     
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