Black Poetry : The need to crumble

[Joyce]

You had to be in a zone when you were writing this, because this is absolutely extraordinary. Nothing was left out and that hook was the bomb!!!

would you crack...if I crumbled

Thank you so much for sharing!

Joyce

 

[Kitana]

mslb..thank you for your reply..I guess we all feel the pressure to crumble every now and then, but it is only a matter of time before you find the strength to go on...

Joyce...thank you so much for your words...that last line is just the way I think we all feel sometimes...it doesn't mean we do not love the one we are with, it just means that sometimes we need to be lifted up and held close instead of just always doing the holding and lifting...sometimes it gets lonely when everyone expects you to be their strength...

K

 

[j'hiah]

awesome from beginning to end.
it kept me open.

peaceful streams,
jh.