Black Poetry : Stressed

[Nita]

wow

Another wonderful piece...I'm luvin your style

Siren Sounds, bodies found
but the all have the same face
Everyones running in the same direction
Only to move at a snails pace
Screams and Yelps all signalling help
ONly to fall upon deaf ears
Feeling swirling, emotion hurling
ONly to spit out tears
Worst battle Ive experienced
And Ive been warring for years
As I glanced around to find out how
all this has came to be
I glanced at the person running next to me
but a reflection of me was all I could see
Wait, Wait whats going on, whats went wrong
Im fighting with myself,
Can turmoil really do this to me
Force me to forget who I am along with everything else!
And everyday life grows a little bit more hectic
Any rational thought I have
Pandimonium cant help but to run an intercept it.
STRESSED

 

[Bluewater]

yes indeed
you laid this out nicely
knowing this crazy stress
flow on
nice drop
much love
Peace
BlueWater

 

[THEONE]

Thank you ,

I really like the way you posed this piece, yes, sometimes we are our own worst enemy. Welcome to destee!!

 

[THEONE]

Thanks You

very nice flow really could feel it
welcome to destee.com
Peace
Blkangel

 

[THEONE]

Thank U thank U Im trying to develope a style to be loved!

Another wonderful piece...I'm luvin your style