Black Poetry : Stressed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 7, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Siren Sounds, bodies found
    but the all have the same face
    Everyones running in the same direction
    Only to move at a snails pace
    Screams and Yelps all signalling help
    ONly to fall upon deaf ears
    Feeling swirling, emotion hurling
    ONly to spit out tears
    Worst battle Ive experienced
    And Ive been warring for years
    As I glanced around to find out how
    all this has came to be
    I glanced at the person running next to me
    but a reflection of me was all I could see
    Wait, Wait whats going on, whats went wrong
    Im fighting with myself,
    Can turmoil really do this to me
    Force me to forget who I am along with everything else!
    And everyday life grows a little bit more hectic
    Any rational thought I have
    Pandimonium cant help but to run an intercept it.
    STRESSED
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really feeling you on this

    i use to feel like this but sometimes i still do i like the wat you posed this one its real you betta know that
    keep writing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like the way you posed this piece, yes, sometimes we are our own worst enemy. Welcome to destee!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u really set the tone very crafty flow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow really could feel it
    welcome to destee.com
    Peace
    Blkangel
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Another wonderful piece...I'm luvin your style :heart:

     
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    yes indeed
    you laid this out nicely
    knowing this crazy stress
    flow on
    nice drop
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ,



     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks You

     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U thank U Im trying to develope a style to be loved!

     
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