Black Poetry : Sprung

[WindWalker]

The was realy good; I like what you had to say!

 

[HODEE]

Wow ....This a great write I really enjoyed it.

Not caring that clothes didn't match, hair on one side and makeup below sea level. ( sorry... I laughed out loud whne I read makeup below sea level )

If there was a train station for love lost. This would be the view from the platform.

I have been sprung not this deep, but deep enough to feel I was in a revolving glass door. I could see the one I desired, but kept missing the opening.

 

[cursed heart]

Great write of how longing can just pull one under a river of tears. This was emotionally charged. Love your work.

Thank you watzinaname

 

[cursed heart]

The was realy good; I like what you had to say!

Thank you windwalker

 

[cursed heart]

Wow ....This a great write I really enjoyed it.

Not caring that clothes didn't match, hair on one side and makeup below sea level. ( sorry... I laughed out loud whne I read makeup below sea level )

If there was a train station for love lost. This would be the view from the platform.

I have been sprung not this deep, but deep enough to feel I was in a revolving glass door. I could see the one I desired, but kept missing the opening.

Love is mother
Thank you for the love HODEE