Black Poetry : Smiley Face (An Erotic Experiment)

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  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his letters are seductive
    with an attractive curve and pitch
    that somehow seem
    to say the things
    that take her from fantasy
    to this

    their rise and fall
    stroke her soul
    spelling and telling her
    to lose control
    all by her lonesome
    so no one else knows
    the more she reads
    he grabs a hold
    touching just right
    caressing so tight
    she wouldn't let go
    if she could

    it hurts so good
    but this aint lust
    this aint a love relationship
    built on trust
    it’s about pouring intimacy
    into her half empty cup
    this is passionate poetry
    can't you hear the thrusts
    and moans

    he tells his secrets
    she listens and groans
    he writes aphrodisiacs
    that impress and turn on
    the lights
    she opens up
    and explores her dark side
    then bashfully admits
    she's the freaky type

    he rubs sentences over her senses
    she interprets them with passion
    he grabs her waist
    goes inside her space
    searching for the taste
    of climaxes

    as she reads between the lines
    her fingers move between her legs
    he inserts his size inside her mind
    with a pen that's long and erect
    the more she reads
    the more she needs
    so hotter...and wetter the ink gets
    his imagination stands in front of her
    she kneels and gives him head
    sucking the sounds and action words
    wanting all that she can get

    he strokes deep thoughts over her g-spot
    and asks if she wants to taste
    she maneuvers her tongue
    to say give me some
    don’t let the flow go to waste

    the silence gets loud
    with punctuation marks that pound
    she’s getting all she can take
    he pulls the rhythm out
    puts it on her mouth
    and writes a smile across her face
     
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    Brother Poet NittyGrit,

    To quote someone else, "Whewwwww!!" I can't help but love this piece because you can truly write and it is definitely erotic. The speaker in this piece has some serious opinions and notes his observations about what he perceives is going on between "she" and "he." When I read poetry I sometimes try to imagine what's going on behind the scenes. I think there is a behind the scene here. But can love, trust and a bond be carved from nothing more than words? I think so...if both believe. half empty cup? geesh (smiley face)
     
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    mad tyte and extreme
     
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