Black Poetry : LOL Smiley Face (Not for kids)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Sep 25, 2009.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his letters spell seduction
    with an attrictive curve and pitch
    that somehow seem
    to say the things
    that take her
    somewhere between fantasy
    and this

    their rise and fall
    stroke her soul
    spelling and telling her
    to loose control
    all by her lonesome
    so no one else knows
    the more she reads
    he grabs ahold
    careessing her so tight
    she wouldn't let go
    if she could

    it feels so good
    but this aint lust
    this aint love or a relationship
    built on trust
    its about putting intimacy
    back into her half empty cup
    this is passionate poetry
    can't you hear the thrusts
    and moans

    he tells her his secrets
    she listens and groans
    he writes aphrodisiacs
    that impress & turn on
    the lights
    she finds comfort in her dark side
    and admits
    she's the freaky type

    as she reads between the lines
    her fingers move between her legs
    he inserts his size inside her mind
    a pen that's long and erect
    the more she reads
    the more she needs
    so hotter...and wetter the ink gets
    his imagination stands in front of her
    she starts to give him head
    just the thought of tasting him
    leaves her fingers warm & drenched

    this exchange is mutual
    with a slow and steady pace
    he strokes deep thoughts over her g-spot
    and asks if she wants to taste
    she uses her tounge to signal yes
    before the pleasure climaxes
    he pulls it out
    puts it on her mouth
    and writes a smile across her face
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u say ......hey Nitty !
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol... That also put a smile on my face too :D
    Great piece poet!!
     
  4. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "its about putting intimacy
    back into her half empty cup
    this is passionate poetry
    can't you hear the thrusts
    and moans"

    I wish whomever was filling your cup would come fill mine up!!! The most passionate moments are sparked with thoughts straight from the mind.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow NittyGrit

    Detailed Imagery & Raw Desire
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NittyGrit:
    My....my...my...
    Its been a while seen I've have had the
    pleasure of reading such a HOTT DROP!!!
    on this forum. I would share my favorite part
    but then I would have to re-post the entire piece.
    You never disappoint....Luved it...Luved it.


    :heart:4EVER
     
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