Black Poetry : Now your *** is missing this......

[Tantrum]

I love this but playas were meant to get playedBut me stop playing that will be the day. I see so many people looking cause they know I have 4 0r 5 chicks. They know when I shop I buy two of everything cause I know I will be with multiple woman and sh--. Life a player just a grand hustle-Life of a player is my main struggle torn between two woman that I love. Trying to play both sides is like being crazy in love.I know your one in a million but I tell every one that I tell every one I love them is that true playa mack. I think most brothers want to be playas cause they watch too much tv. Every one wants to be that bentley driving-**** that 9 till 5 and cocca tree selling-too many guns in the trunk carrying you to the next level until its judgement time fool. Yet im still a playa what choice do I have but to tell yall to neva ever cross nevar cause you'll see through the act!!
Much Love Poet!!

 

[nevar]

thanks tantrum for the love and i'm sure no one will listen to your warning

 

[Desert Storm]

Take is slow gurl... I definately symphathize but I want to emphathize... Let love rain down on ya flow
Even though he don't know
Make your beauty complete
Even though some can't go that deep
Lavish yourself with a good book
Sit close to the fire
Pamper yourself something extra
Respect yaself
And see yourself shine
Be all that you can be
Let peace rule ya heart and mind.
Keep flying and soaring higher and higher never to retire
Don't you know you inspire?

Desert Storm
Too blessed to be stressed.

 

[nevar]

thanks desert storm i'll do that.

 

[ASHANTA]

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