Black Poetry : ?Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Archival, Oct 21, 2006.

  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nobody loves me like you do
    the silent song a river hums
    whispering acceptance
    i am broken
    put back together
    in you
    perfect
    you say welcome home
    and I come inside


    Infrequently Soulful.....
    Archival
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed what breaks down often fixed inside warmth of a heart
    nice drop poeticlly
     
  3. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks, keep the flow alive.

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  4. Key-L

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    Smooth, flowin & cool. Thanks 4 sharing

    Key-L
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done--Amun-Ra
     
  6. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey

    Amun-Ra, now theres someone I respect from the long long ago here.

    Thanks, always enjoyed your words.

    Archival
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that title, "?Love"
    Makes me wonder if there's two sides to this. I do like it though. Well Done!
     
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