Black Poetry : Lonely

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A solo journey
    Lacking purpose and direction
    A heart turning cold
    Without kindness and affection

    Nothing coming in
    Nothing going out
    Day to day existence
    That's what lonely is about

    Lonely is as lonely does
    The internal void
    The longing for what was
    Everyday tears
    Just because

    A condition
    One would rather keep inside
    But loneliness like happiness
    Is something you can't hide

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt BE.......

    lonelness u can't hide

    this line speaks so much to me ova tyme
    i just see too many looking for reasons
    for lonelness.......!
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yes

    lonely is such a sad place to be...

    and you nailed it when you said..
    "nothing comin in, nothing going out"

    and it is definitely, "a solo journey"

    K
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loneliness

    is a most dangerous state of mind...it brings about the sense of hopelessness and even worthlessness. And neither is true ~ especially when a glimmer of even the memory of love can shine through.

    a
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a sad but good read!!!!!!!!!
     
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