Black Poetry : The 3 AM Lonely

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I feel lonely…
    like I do now at quarter pass three,
    In the morning….
    I have to remember,
    I chose this lonely.
    When my heart is sinking within me,
    And the four walls are glaring at me not so nicely
    And the house is still
    Not a movement I see
    And I can't fall asleep
    I have to remember
    I chose this lonely.
    Because when I was with you
    I was lonely
    But this lonely I have now
    Is a lonely of a different tree
    Of whose branches love me tenderly
    And show compassion and love for me
    Because they know…
    I was alone while with you,
    And now I choose
    To be lonely
    With just me


    :em2900:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For when u feel lonely
    u don't have to be
    Just remember u got a family
    just click on to Destee's
    there u will fine yep lonely me
    awaiting a sister so sweet

    so lonely u don't have to be
    when we can share laughter and
    happiness as a we
    picture in a open mind
    close ya sexy round eyez
    there i be standing smiling
    to take away any lonelyness

    so lonely u don't have to be
    my sis u got yep $$RICHIE$$
    allow me inside ya slumbering mind
    let me enter just one time
    and lonelyness will never reside
    when u feel alone
    close ya eyez and let ya mind roam
    there only there, am so to be .
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nothing wrong with chillin' with you sometimes

    anyway

    lonely is just a state of mind
    and why be with someone who's a pain in the behind
    wasting your time
    cheatin' and lyin'
    when you should be treated with TLC
    and like you're one of a kind

    stay strong
    don't lose focus

    on you

    peace
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The worse kind of lonely is being lonely right next to the one who is supposed to love you. Yes, much better to be by yourself. Well expressed scribe.
     
  5. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww...that was beautiful Rich...made me feel, like a had a friend around. So sweet, and so right on time....your always right on time :kiss:

    Hot Stret..real hot. Yeah, he was somethin' else....

    Yes Watz, you know it. Although I feel lonely, it doesn't compare to the loneliness my soul felt while with him...I was just going through the motions.
     
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    sweet apple*pie:
    Very well expressed, its only
    because you have been use to
    someone being there. Give yourself
    a minute and you will not feel lonely anymore
    you will come to appreciate your time
    to yourself.


    Much Luv
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loneliness is at it’s loneliest in the deepest time of night
    But not as lonely as being alone while being with someone else.


    Feeling your flow soul-deep!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what she said :D
     
  9. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well felt scribe. its nothing worse to be in a relationship and still feel alone.
     
  10. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so very true...how the heart aches with pain, when it is held by unidentifiable hands....hands that it only pretends to know.

    thanks so much for visiting....
     
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