Black Poetry : Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Watcher, Feb 8, 2001.

  1. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    City streets crying out for healing
    Bleeding and its life force depleting
    Calling out to anyone who can hear
    Is there anyone who will shed a tear?
    Not the way it’s supposed to be
    Not in the land of the free
    Enslaved in our mind
    Killing off mankind
    Warped mentality
    Human mortality
    Backwards morality
    Senseless decisions
    Family ties segregated into division
    Money is the talk of the hour
    Kill off each other and gain the power
    That’s the life we live
    We take but refuse to give
    No shame
    Dangerous game
    Death bell rings
    No more songs to sing
    Where do we go from here?

    Nowhere…….
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite strong Watcher... Feeling every line. Well done.
    BE
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    agreeing w/Heartbeat ... feeling every line of this Watcher

    tite ta def ... must be in da genes

    :)
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! Has anyone seen Watcher???

    The brotha is missed...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :confused: Watchin' for the Watcher...:confused:

    Bish, $R...where's the brotha? :confused: How's he doing?:confused:

    :peace:
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  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this has truly moved me...

    "family ties segregated into division
    money is the talk of the hour
    kill off each other and gain the power
    that's the life we live..."

    if i must say so myself, you hit the head
    right on the nail :)

    right on brother :lol: right on ;)

    pd
     
  7. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watcher is always Watchin GQ!! I'm always here even when it seems different....Just Watchin......and waiting......
     
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