Black Poetry : Lets go for a ride.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 30, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The river floodin
    Pain seeps in…not knowin
    Hurtin
    Cant find….
    Up when down
    Pretendin everything
    is fine..
    Look at the wind the
    storm is comin
    Cant seem to get out….
    Drownin no one to catch
    Alone and empty…..
    Searchin thy soul
    Holdin thy own
    But yet pretend
    I am ok when
    I am runnin as
    the ground shakes….
    The earth slips from
    Under me…I fall
    Deep within the
    black hole….
    a roller
    coaster
    moving fast
    stuck at the top…
    tryin to get down..
    but scared to climb…
    lightin strikes…no one
    there....
    which way I turn
    cant sale thy soul
    I use to be bold
    for he unfolded whats of me…
    page after page…
    rewrittin
    menadin
    healin
    and
    holdin…then it stop…
    my tears run black
    my heart ran off
    my soul broke….
    The river floodin
    Pain seeps in…
    dayum this hurts.....

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow fa sho mzblkangel!!!
    took me ona ride for real
    i like... i like :)

    peace & blessings
    nadia*binta
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel terrible saying that I liked this becuz there is just so much pain & anguish.

    But that just tells me that U are definitely a poet, not just someone that writes poetry.

    I feel your pain and my mind offers a shoulder.

    Lovely.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah mush love to you my sister
    feeling the depth of this flow
    Peace
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NADIA*BINTA
    Bluewater
    PositiveMindset

    glad you enjoyed the read...much love

    thanks for your support means alot... :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One day all the pain will end and you'll find your rainbow. Very well crafted, and heartfelt.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah my sistah, this is so very beautifully done (but what else is new). I'm here for you as you know. Much love
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname and gempis couldnt ask for better poet sister then yall..thanks for da support and love...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da ride of life wow!!
    it hurts i feel ya here big time
    flow express release
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ thanks for da read..much love to you...:angel1:
     
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