Black Poetry : lets go for a ride pt2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how do you make
    the pain go away
    and come back another day
    or just stay away soul bleed
    heart turned cold..
    and the cry wont stop..
    feels like the waves are crashin
    and the mind on fire
    as the wind blow
    the twist in the night…
    the storm comes
    and seems to just stay..
    black clouds form above…
    and it pours….fears
    and the pain of it all
    life dreams placed at a end…
    so how do you pretend
    that the soul don’t bleed..
    the star that guides
    thru the night..
    wont shine..and the
    moon don’t show…
    how do you make the pain go away.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwww!!
    da ride is too bumpy
    this was very nicely done
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wishing you peace my sista :grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As you work it out with your pen, I feel this, so filled with desperation that catches my soul. Peace to you.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all go on this ride..
    every blue moon..
    someone out there
    i just spoke the words for them...
    much love fam...:angel1:
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are so right about this it's scary. this is the image of relentless pain.
     
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