Black Poetry : Interuder Alert

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mikha'el, Sep 16, 2010.

  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Heres Another one for ya....Note all the pieces i shall post unless noted are from a series The devil is the friend spoken of....God is the narrator and The Boy is me....enjoy


    The day has come and now reality sets in
    From bliss to amiss the world you’ll see how quick they forget you
    Ironically all this after you’ve graduated
    Transcended from the presence of angels to being among wolves
    Fear in his heart along with uncertainty
    Misery loves company so a friend was brought into the mix
    Many a days in silent pain nothing said
    So young and vulnerable is he that it goes over his head
    Mixed subliminal messages unable to perceive the reception
    Can’t correlate the idea that these people using deception
    From verbal to physical it’s affecting his mental
    What’s even worse is how this picture is being seen through his temples
    Pain is love speaks truth but only when you see through the lines
    But it’s so blurred that it don’t occur to him to back out
    Confided in the eyes of the others and especially his friend
    He is looking for acceptance in all of the wrong places
    Highs off the phony smiles of devilish faces
    But unforeseen is the hand that lurks over his shoulder
    An ice cold grip he holds soon it’ll only get colder
    But the seeds have been planted and soon they’ll start to grow
    An intruder is lurking and he doesn’t even know
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another great piece Mike
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhh double snap very vivid depiction brotha mike I can dig it
    the voice of the piece suits your profile pic :)
    very intense and brooding lol
    props poet!
     
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