Black Poetry : HOLD ON I'M COMING.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by spicybrown, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This here piece is a response to:
    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=40651


    Bet y'all thought this would be something X-rated

    Instead this is for my e-friend, y'all can love it or y'all can hate it,

    won't mention no names, for he should know who he is, no need to be specific

    call me big-headed if it pleases you, but his poetry is as deep as the Pacific,

    is he speaking to me, through his words that cut my heart so deep?,

    i'm assuming so, because our chemistry merges oh so perfectly....i get weak,

    in the knees,

    please,

    don't misunderstand my motive, yes I do have a man,

    what's love got to do with it, my bond with him is eternal as the beach sands,

    why can't we be friends? I ask, you're so close, yet soooo distant,

    if had a choice, I'll fill up the tank, be by your side in an instant,

    easier said than done,

    shining star you are the one,

    that livens my nights, and brightens my days,

    you replenish my soul with that piercing gaze,

    that's posted in the Family Picture album,

    I'll stop right here, make y'all wanna say "hummmmm"



    :smooch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whomever thy be , it's nothing wrong u see
    forth thy heart befriends just like the next to kin
    for the grace and piercing glaze has set off this maze
    that will or don't have to fade

    surely that one is holding on forth he knows ya coming
    i hear ya sis ...nothing wrong with a mental love .........
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OoooWwwEeee look @ you Spicy :eek:hmy:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: Spicy :spinstar: You got me. I thought it was going to be X-Rated. May I drop a line? If he could he would be near. So far away so crystal clear. The price of fuel is no limit or reason to not be with your friend in any season.

    He Whispers.... softly in your ear. Yes! :ilu: To have someone as sweet as you take me into your thoughts makes me a fortunate soul.

    I see you and him doing a :driveby: together. Take the wheel!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spicy got a crush spicy got a crush. i wont tell literally i'll be your diary hahahah!!!! flo on sista.:spinstar:
     
  6. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nevar.....

    Lol, LMBAO..Nevar, you know you a mess. Thanx y'all, watch a bunch of wild rumors start unfolding:spinstar:
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like they're lucky to have a friend like you.
    Nice drop, Spicy.
    One love
     
  8. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *blushes* Geez I never thought about it, I blush a lot to be a Black woman!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    things that make you go hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a nice little piece
    Much Love Poet-Need to grace us more
     
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