Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Aug 5, 2002.
Click Here To Read...Enjoy.
indeeed!!! let me feel her deep within da soul of me!!
now u let out some heavy vibes here....
i'm intimately acquainted with POEM
she came to visit me at a tender age
and stayed...for awhile
mild and yearning
for life's flow
gave me a portion of herself
then offered some mo'
i took a taste
and loved the effect
of POEM on soul
not any part did she neglect
she said that one day i'd come to meet
another of her friends...one truly unique
and when that day do finally arrive
your eyes will dance as you realize
the world...with all its joys and pains
is made better by POEM
as she flows, again.
MINE EYES DO DANCE, SISTAH J.
Joyce...this was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us.
MY SISTA, MY SISTA! OH WHAT JOY YOU BRING!
OH, I KNOW THOSE WORDS SO WELL, YOU HAVE WRITTEN ON MY HEART AND TOUCHING MY SOUL YOU NEVER FAIL...VISITING YOUR RELIGIOUS POET SITE LATE INTO THE NIGHT TO REFURBISH AND RENEW...I THANK GOD FOR THE WOMAN CALLED"POEM" AND I THANK HIM THRICE FOR YOU!
BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
THANK YOU! FOR BEING SO SPRITUALLY ,CONSISTENLY YOU!
Again, I'm placed in awe of the poet and the critics, but I did enjoy your "prose". It helped me to understand a little better this free form that I have otherwise not encountered. Thank you, and I look forward to more "poems", lol.
Rich...you are right on it. Thanks for the read.
Baller...That's a beautiful poem dude. Thanks for the read.
RedLady...You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
msluciousb...Thank you for a heartful of wonderful words.
This is what I live for. If I can touch the heart of
one reader, then I have not failed. Being spiritually,
consistent, is a welcome challenge for me. I have
always despised wearing two 'faces'.
smilin_dwarf...You are a sweet heart. Thanks for the read.
I really enjoyed the read
well done Poet. Poem is beautiful.
Joyce you gone get me fired
but your peace is wonderful... love ya style fo sho....
Separate names with a comma.