Black Poetry : Eternally

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eternally
    Eternity
    Eternal
    In any form of the word
    it means forever
    Certainly difficult to fathom
    but never say never
    I can only imagine
    Lingering in your delicious, soulful kiss
    forever and a day
    Savoring, making sure I don't miss
    any of that sweet honey
    coating those soft lips that speak
    to me, desperately pleading, saying
    Baby...Hmmmm, you know that makes me weak
    You can call me Baby forever, eternally,
    It would take an eternity to list all there is about you
    that pulled me, drew me, forced me into the
    whirlwind of your touch, 'twas nothing I could do
    Helpless, I am, and always have been. Must be
    eternal, this s-l-o-w grind, lover's dance
    feeling your hips grinding in a rhythmic groove
    deep in your embrace, swept into a trance
    eternally caught in your eyes
    as you're caught in mine, transfixed
    nary a wedge coming between us
    not even an after thought betwixt
    for we are mesmerized in each
    other's inner beings, the real,
    the honest to God naked truth
    opening our spirits up to feel
    forever
    Eternally
    Eternity
    Eternal
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome flowing
    had me saying ummmmmm
    i be good dis tyme!...lol
     
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    You'll be good....ok...I knew that took some effort, lol. Thank you so much Rich, your kind words of support mean so much.
     
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    Eternity...sound so good, it's a lifetime. That in which we all wish for. this was a awesome piece and I enjoyed reading it, and if I name some that should have eternal bliss...surely you would be one.
     
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    Beautiful drop here....4ReeLz...."true dat" take any form you choose...Forever should mean just that...........Nice release-piece....one love
     
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    Awww, Queent, eternal bliss for me? What a sweet thing to say. Thank you so much sista.
    afrostotle, glad to know you enjoyed the release here. Your support is very much appreciated.
     
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    Beeeeeutyuful, sistah. Love the way this just flows down.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gempis, such kind words from a thoughtful poet.
     
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    this was soo beautiful watz. you got me up in here speechless

    I really liked this one :)
     
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    you used the words transfixed and mezmerized in this poem and i realized while reading that that is exactly what i was :jawdrop: both of those

    something else dawned on me while reading this for the third time (i said 3rd) and that is

    "I Smiled"
    the whole entire each time I read it I smiled...

    keep writing my Sista, you da bomb :bomb:
     
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