Black Poetry : Eternally Yours

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Feb 13, 2003.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tomorrow I won’t give you
    those material things that
    a lot of men give to profess
    their love for their woman

    I’ll just give you my heart
    once more as a testament
    of my undying love for you

    In return I want nothing except
    the look of love you give me after
    we’ve
    shared a touch,
    held a caress,
    or deeper still,
    mutually climaxed and cried together
    in overjoyed passion

    This, my love, is all I need to know
    and feel what real love is;
    because you have been a part of my
    soul now and you shall always be

    As the moon beams its gentle light on
    us tonight, we eagerly anticipate the rising
    of the sun on our happiness tomorrow…for we
    are warmed by such an ordinary day for us…

    We have always loved one another
    with tender care
    and
    tomorrow
    shall be no exception

    You see, with you there has never been a void
    in my life because you’ve filled the once empty
    space with such pure innocence that my love for
    you cannot be controlled…for me, it would be a
    vain thing to do

    Tomorrow I will feel you with my mental in ways
    the ordinary man can only dream of; with a sacred
    love that overflows with an abundance of substance

    It is an undeniable love that I gladly give to you with
    all my heart today, tomorrow, and forever
    &
    I will always be
    E~T~E~R~N~A~L~L~Y
    Y~O~U~R~S

    for many lifetimes
    to come

    ©GQINC2K3
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    shower her wit da heart and she will melt sho nuff in it
    love da flow i told u ya da cupid on da block
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ - The Romance Man

    This is way better than that fattning candy!

    Happy Valentines Day yall.
     
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    Word from the heart can seduce me any day. beautiful piece


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  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poets!!!

    Happy V-Day!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Man you laid this one down....the ladies gonna be banging at ya door!!!
     
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