Black Poetry : "Eros"- Words from a Rose

[BrittanyMalachi]

Well, as the saying goes
"Be careful what you ask for"
Eros came running
He knocked on my door
Seduced me with conversation
It didn't take long
Before I knew it
He became Mr. Wrong
His chocolate form
Gave my body sensations
Revitalization
Without hesitation
Soon,
I was in love
I wanted to make him Mr. Right
But he made me Mrs. Wrong
And two wrongs don't make a right
So we had to get a divorce
And I was willing of course
But, soon, I saw his heart
And I was filled with remorse
But it was too late
The papers were signed
Sealed and delivered
Too late to resign
Now he's gone
And I'm alone
Keeping house
In an empty home
I guess these are the cards that I was dealt
Why didn't anyone tell me how eros felt?

 

[Nahshon]

BrittanyMalachi, some times You get a Eros from a rose
yet most times it brings you a pricked sore from the thorns it brings
yet if you're patient that rose might bring to you what you desire
a ring formed from the gold or platinum ores topped with a diamond on top...

 

[$$RICH$$]

sometime we can handle a rose wrongly and the thorns can hurt
but a rose can be a beautiful flower within like a heart of love....

 

[BrittanyMalachi]

If a rose is taken care of, it will bloo

BrittanyMalachi, some times You get a Eros from a rose
yet most times it brings you a pricked sore from the thorns it brings
yet if you're patient that rose might bring to you what you desire
a ring formed from the gold or platinum ores topped with a diamond on top...

Yes, a rose in patient care blooms well. The better the love, the better the bloom....maybe one day my Eros will give me what I desire. Perhaps he will see the rose that I am and he will take his part in my blooming....

 

[BrittanyMalachi]

sometime we can handle a rose wrongly and the thorns can hurt
but a rose can be a beautiful flower within like a heart of love....

Yes, my Eros handled me wrong and was cut by my thorns. Regret came later...it was too late. Eros lost his love, but time is a healer. Perhaps one day, God will bring him back and I can bloom again....