Black Poetry : "Eros"- Words from a Rose

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  1. BrittanyMalachi

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    Well, as the saying goes
    "Be careful what you ask for"
    Eros came running
    He knocked on my door
    Seduced me with conversation
    It didn't take long
    Before I knew it
    He became Mr. Wrong
    His chocolate form
    Gave my body sensations
    Revitalization
    Without hesitation
    Soon,
    I was in love
    I wanted to make him Mr. Right
    But he made me Mrs. Wrong
    And two wrongs don't make a right
    So we had to get a divorce
    And I was willing of course
    But, soon, I saw his heart
    And I was filled with remorse
    But it was too late
    The papers were signed
    Sealed and delivered
    Too late to resign
    Now he's gone
    And I'm alone
    Keeping house
    In an empty home
    I guess these are the cards that I was dealt
    Why didn't anyone tell me how eros felt?
     
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    BrittanyMalachi, some times You get a Eros from a rose
    yet most times it brings you a pricked sore from the thorns it brings
    yet if you're patient that rose might bring to you what you desire
    a ring formed from the gold or platinum ores topped with a diamond on top...
     
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    sometime we can handle a rose wrongly and the thorns can hurt
    but a rose can be a beautiful flower within like a heart of love....
     
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    If a rose is taken care of, it will bloo
    Yes, a rose in patient care blooms well. The better the love, the better the bloom....maybe one day my Eros will give me what I desire. Perhaps he will see the rose that I am and he will take his part in my blooming....
     
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    Yes, my Eros handled me wrong and was cut by my thorns. Regret came later...it was too late. Eros lost his love, but time is a healer. Perhaps one day, God will bring him back and I can bloom again....
     
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