Khasm13 : daylight...

[triniti424]

my body
immersed in the darkness I know not
momentarily breathless by this feeling of doubt
chills
“fixated by imaginary fields”
is that what they are?
reaching in the blinding obscurity
searching for something remotely feigning security
but I can see nothing but ME
and barely that
straining to feel for my reflection
attaining further isolation
light
shine on me
why has thou forsaken me?
In the darkness I hear a cry
such as I
seeking the same sun filled solution
I… allow darkness to encompass me
so that I may be one with this other traveling entity
finding that in my weak release
we may BOTH find the light of peaceful relief

 

[arthur1210]

Whoa!... nice piece, you are pulling us all into the lost darkness with you as we read... How do we get out?

Thanks As always for dropin' a hot one

 

[PositiveMindset]

Brother, this piece has enlightened me 2 why U are Khasm...

Your mind is a wide open expanse of awe inspiring beauty that must be respected, cuz 1 false move could cost U dearly.

Do your d@mn thang, brother, U got my full attention.

 

[phenomenalwoman]

i agree with the others you definitely pull your readers in to the darkness. nice piece

 

[Melody]

i think that pretty much nails what everybody thinks when they are trapped in darkness. Just no one could put it into words. Good job!