Black Poetry : You know what I'm Saying

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Pressure, Jan 4, 2005.

  1. Pressure

    Pressure New Member MEMBER

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    Angry Aggression is
    Barely a Barometer of your
    Constant Celebrity but
    Despite the Dissension
    Enmity Enters me
    Far-flung Fiestas and a
    Gullible Guise
    Hides your Heresy
    Inviting yet Infamous
    Jaded yet Jubilant your
    Kinetic Kickback brings a
    Legion of Liabilities and with your
    Mammoth Machinations your
    Never ending Nuances which
    Obviously Obliterates
    Palpable Peace.
    Qualifications and Quarantines during our
    Reverent Restlessness while in
    Self-denial and Seclusion and then
    Treachery’s tempting me during
    Utter Urgency meanwhile
    Valiance turns to Villainy and
    Wisdom Wanes and we’re
    Inexorably Expunged into
    Years of yielding to your
    Zestless Zeal

    You know what I'm Saying
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & peace
    as i move this to the poetry forum we use this one for spoken words
    so family can hear you speak poetry
    welcome within
     
  3. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very impressive, and a unique way of gettin your point across. I hear what your sayin, and i would like to hear more. I will look forward to reading more from you. :)
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome alliteration. Welcome poet, I enjoyed your flow.
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    yep...i think i know what you're saying....I got "the abc of it...right down to the xyz of it."
    really enjoyed...looking forward to more...
     
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