Nigeria : Why Do They Hate Me? Poem for a Nigerian Sistah

[MrBlak]

This was a powerful peice of writting. You cover a very dark and disturbing topic so poetically, one cant beleive the ease with which they read it. Its like the horror of each line sets in once you are much further along in the poem. I am new here and now will be looking out of other things you write. Well done!

 

[Khasm13]

i know the incident of which you speak...
you have captured the emotion masterfully...
a woman should never be seen as property...
deep soulful scribe sista....keep flowin
one love
khasm

 

[river]

This is what I wanted to do--touch the brothahs and the sistahs. I hope this poem speaks on and on because the stones take many forms.

BTW, I know not too many people over in the short stories forum but I posted "Trauma" just before going to New York and hope you will like it.