Black Poetry : What We Gonna Do?

GhostDog15

Active Member
REGISTERED MEMBER
Feb 23, 2004
29
0
Virgina, born NY
Occupation
Chiefs Aid, Waiter, Bus Boy
this is my vary first peom, thought i might get a hobby, so i thought i may get into it... im horriable at it, you guys all kick so much ***, i can only dream to be as good as any of you honesty, yall got talent. Last year, i put in a booking cell for 9 hours for rightful suspention, 100% pure racisal profiling. anyways heres my peom, please tell me what yal think.. its my vary first. I call it what we gonna do?

What we gonna do?

How far we got, My grandma’s thought?
Equailty is all they want, but why not?

That’s all I wanna see, One day, one night.
When I can walk though a mall under a rentacops sight.

If you can, why can’t I, why can’t I?

Maybe thats all I can be,
A flee stuck in the sea,

A soldier wit the skin.
Only with the power within

Or is it without?
The ****** shell is that what this **** is about all about?
I couldn’t help but have to shout
.
The ****** shell,
The reason why I got thrown in the cell
Renting a movie for my parents to yell
A reasonable right to suspect is all they tell

The 5o’s way to get nigs off the street
Throw em in the cell till they are old meat
The way it feels is something to reap,
Cryin like a *****, in that cold seat.

9 hours is how long they made me sweat,
Imaging the f***s happing next.

But hey, not like us ******* can sue,
All we do is live and die, exist like a foo
You can’t say this **** happens to you too.
But hey, we just *******… what we gonna do?


tell me what you think please? i wanna get good i this, i was hopping yall will help me, i can make more
 
Hello and Welcome:wave:
This is a very nice poem you have dropped
some of your words are in ( * * * * )
because they are on our banned word list
please review our Poetic Etiquette above
so we can get the full feel of your flows
with out the curse words:)
you are welcome to come to Open Mic in voice chat
No hold bars..uncensor..and speak your peace
we have a Poetry Slam this Friday..come and flow it openly
on the Open Mic
Peace
BlueWater:heart:
 

Donate

Support destee.com, the oldest, most respectful, online black community in the world - PayPal or CashApp

Latest profile posts

TractorsPakistan.com is one of the leading tractor exporters from Pakistan to Africa and the Caribbean regions.
HODEE wrote on Etophil's profile.
Welcome to Destee
@Etophil
Back
Top