Quiet Poetry Lounge : What Is It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by virtuousmujer, Oct 21, 2009.

  1. virtuousmujer

    virtuousmujer New Member MEMBER

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    Is it coming from the north, south east or west
    I sense its movement towards me but dont know its direction
    So powerful and so very frigtening
    I am drawn to its mysteries
    Captivated by its natural resources
    I await its entry
    Be still my impatientness
    It wants to absorb me
    giving me more of its simplicity:star:
     
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    ouuuuuuuu Sister ... what is it ????!!! ... :eeek:

    You've got me wondering too! :) ... Great Peace! ... :toast:

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    Much Love and Peace.

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    Hello and Welcome Virtuousmujer

    I don't know what IT is, but I really like this peace! I read it more than once and each time come away with a feeling of an innocence colliding with the experienced. Then again, it could just be my imagination running away, you know as we writers tend to do. :)

    Again, welcome to the family and I look forward to reading more from you.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    a mystery this is to me flow on poet!:toast:
     
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    what is it really.....I love da mystery of it........welcome sis
     
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    Well, now, you've got everybody's curiosity UP!

    Are you gonna tell us?!

    Is it love?


    Come on now, put us out of our misery! lol


    Great piece!....You really know how to set up some suspense and foreshadowing!


    This was a brain-teaser and a mental-pleaser!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nyce, keep scribin' it...i will continue to read. i love tha flow of this piece.