Black Poetry : WAY BACK WHEN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Way back when
    da day we claim
    friendz u took me
    in i allow deep within
    as we mend
    we act as to be kin
    knowing my world
    is different then yours
    u knew dis would be
    u left me for the
    wolfz as if i was bait

    but today i'm telling
    it str8 from da soul
    dis was very cold
    ya bold to stand beside me
    knowing ya gonna
    kick me again
    let me tell ya
    den back in da day
    together we played
    had all da fun
    now today i gotta run
    nall " dat's not me
    i've looked and set a
    web to weave u in
    and lay da hammer down
    but in my sight da vision
    i see u again da smile
    i can't believe dis
    i see the race bout done
    just then a man produce
    and said u can do it , i like
    it dis way ...........but u
    must write my story
    little did he know i did
    a long time ago
    i written the lier off
    i've written the cheep shots
    i've written false hope
    i written da cheats off
    the story has been before
    the board and it was passed
    i only hope the royality of it
    was wroth it all :(
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin you tonight...
    i want more...lol
    you tight keep this flow going
    love the read...kisses
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a mind thing of how it was to what it is
    thank u
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    understandin that mind thang..got one going on myself...
    but i am here for you kiss my RICHNESS
     
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    Wow...my brotha...you depict pain as deep as you do love...and I felt it...I am sorry for your pain...I really am.
    U want me break out the boots and pop some1 upside the head LoL...:)
    flow on my brotha :)
     
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    thankz blkangel

    thankz triniti

    this one i have to deal with alone
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well
    here if you need me rich...
    good lucky:kiss: