Black Poetry : VII and VIII

[daroc]

i'm almost done yall bear wit me... its one after this... thanks for paying attn so long.........

freedom part VII

wats freedom.. if my mind aint free...?
if my mind
continues to suffer....
and be a slave to all yall games...
if my mind is still captive.. my body aint never gonna be free....
cuz ..umm.. aint my mind supposed 2 control my body...
and....
if my mind is still a criminal ...
in this fukcd up prison
on amerikkk's land
then.. my body aint nothing but
doing my minds time....
FOR FREE
huh....again... let me ask yall...
wats free?

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freedom part VIII

freedom....
is it even possible
in our minds
can
will
its meaning ever be acheived in
my time
is the world truely ready
for its presence
people crave for
civil rights
equal rights
civil liberties
fair treatment
no discrimination
for all freedoms
growth of our spirits
but one day
wat if one day they all got it
would they even kno
wit all that they do...
the government has US so mesed up
got our thots so screwed...
that if we did have freedom
these freedoms
the true meaning of being free
if we had it.... would we even kno
would it show.....
since We r so blind to reality.....​

 

[BlatinaPoet4u]

Tyte flow!!! But ur right wut is FREEDOM? Ur flow was tyte keep doin the d@mn thing!!! :devil:

 

[watzinaname]

Free your mind, and the rest will follow. I'm not tired of this flow of freedom cause you break it down so well.

 

[toylin]

D@mn.... I really need to find that afro pick! *looking under 400 years of lies, digging through the roots of destruction that were laid..* I KNOW it's around here somewhere.. keep going girl! I'm here with you all the way!

 

[jazzymoonchild]

Somebody sure is shining during their week! Great flow poet. I loved the way you broke them all down.