Black Poetry : VII and VIII

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm almost done yall bear wit me... its one after this... thanks for paying attn so long.........

    freedom part VII

    wats freedom.. if my mind aint free...?
    if my mind
    continues to suffer....
    and be a slave to all yall games...
    if my mind is still captive.. my body aint never gonna be free....
    cuz ..umm.. aint my mind supposed 2 control my body...
    and....
    if my mind is still a criminal ...
    in this fukcd up prison
    on amerikkk's land
    then.. my body aint nothing but
    doing my minds time....
    FOR FREE
    huh....again... let me ask yall...
    wats free?

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    freedom part VIII

    freedom....
    is it even possible
    in our minds
    can
    will
    its meaning ever be acheived in
    my time
    is the world truely ready
    for its presence
    people crave for
    civil rights
    equal rights
    civil liberties
    fair treatment
    no discrimination
    for all freedoms
    growth of our spirits
    but one day
    wat if one day they all got it
    would they even kno
    wit all that they do...
    the government has US so mesed up
    got our thots so screwed...
    that if we did have freedom
    these freedoms
    the true meaning of being free
    if we had it.... would we even kno
    would it show.....
    since We r so blind to reality.....
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow!!! But ur right wut is FREEDOM? Ur flow was tyte keep doin the [email protected] thing!!! :hot: :devil: :hot:
     
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    Free your mind, and the rest will follow. I'm not tired of this flow of freedom cause you break it down so well.
     
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    [email protected]... I really need to find that afro pick! *looking under 400 years of lies, digging through the roots of destruction that were laid..* I KNOW it's around here somewhere.. keep going girl! I'm here with you all the way!
     
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    Somebody sure is shining during their week! Great flow poet. I loved the way you broke them all down.
     
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    break down gurl and release..tight drop
    continue on!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free me softly lovin it all wow!!!!
    u go gurl
     
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