Black Poetry : timely

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah
    It’s da boy
    U heard him
    About him

    Who is he really?
    A tortured
    Lonely
    Scrub
    Da boy need love
    He need a lil more attention
    A few dates
    Ain’t **** to him
    He sentimental
    But his shell
    Is turtle
    He’ll love u
    But he’ll hurt u
    In eyes’ eyes
    He’s disguise
    As anotha guy

    A woman’s worth
    Is worth much
    But to his dismay
    He get them June
    When he can only afford May
    And she do him all right
    But he’ll settle
    If she ain’t the top design
    Sometime
    He does things …..he don’t want
    He has no spine
    At times
    He just want times
    Time is short
    His time
    Is timeless
    If timing his
    Timely needs


    holla at da boy
    im out
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's Hear It For The Boy

    I really like this. I can identify with this all day long, from a man's perspective. Great work!!!
     
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    very tight
    feeling the time
    and pace you put
    into this scribe
    nice one poet
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was awesome i can feel every line
     
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    A sweetie when you get through that tough shell, I liked the way you posed this.
     
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