Black Poetry : then is when

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  1. brotherdarrows@

    brotherdarrows@ Member MEMBER

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    pray for me when

    i get up and go to work when

    you know its time then

    i start to do something for myself then

    i act like i have good sense then

    the need for me to have security when

    i understand it going to happen when

    i get up and change my own disposition then

    things will change for me and mine when

    i start to do what needs to be done then

    you can start to pray for me then

    only when i try to help myself then

    i will be worthy of Gods help then

    and only then when things start to change when

    in the end then

    is where we begin then

    please pray for me when

    then is when
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is said that God helps those who help themselves, for God has given you the strength within to strive. Posed on point poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice piece surely i can relate