Black Poetry : The Mind of A Child In A Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by J-Row, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. J-Row

    J-Row Member MEMBER

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    Feeling my self touched
    By the hands of
    A nasty man,
    Hands on my body
    Where they shouldn't be

    Frightened,
    When he steped to me
    Calling out for a hero
    "SAVE ME" from this zero
    Why is this happening

    Five years old
    Wishing I was big and bold
    Tired of running
    Ready to tell...
    But beatdown

    He, less than a man
    Threatening to do more harm
    If I told anyone
    And now,
    I tell the world

    For years I hurt
    In silence
    Bloodied and ashamed
    Needing to stop the pain
    Oh hell,
    Here he comes again!!!
    Will it ever end
    Or,
    Will I die hating me
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're not alone...

    I feel your pain to the fullest but...you are never alone. Your spirit is always with you to aid and guide you to any thing you want to...do, feel or think. In other words...your spirit feeds off your thought process. Step inside (yourself) for a few minutes a day...tell your spirit to put out all the trash and replace it with the QUEEN that's always been hidden inside you.
    I'm pulling for you...

    queentswana :grouphug:
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the epitome of lessening your words is not my curves
    to say i feel you, would be absurd
    fact is i'm only human
    in truth my shell can be breached by a word
    the fact that you shared
    show that you cared
    for others reaching for the strength to(o)

    grow and be as brave as you...

    keep reaching for the sky^

    One-l
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    :wave:
    welcome to destee...
    likes this drop
    flow on....
    hope to read more
    Peace :angel1:
     
  5. 1poetsought

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    Welcome J-Row,

    Your coming here to share this and hopefully more is a blessing to everyone. You are right to tell the world everything it knows and everything it ignores. Healing is contagious.
     
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    welcome j-row
    just to let you know
    your not the only one
    to feel this nasty blow...
    please continue on
    with your flow....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    dis was very well felt scribe deeply
    surely u not alone
    keep flowing
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You will never be alone here, J-Row. Welcome to our community. This was a deeply felt drop. Peace and love to you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sensitive and painful scribe, yet there is a ray of light inside. Let that light shine.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww.....this was so sad......so so sad......nice write.....heart felt......and welcome to the family.
     
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