Black Poetry : SYSTEMATIC

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SYSTEMATIC

    Haters balloon like craters on rthe moon while I;’m an educator
    Whom tune folks to knowledge spole in college as a devastator
    Choke garbage take complex looks at texbooks vexed and shook
    Over the contents in prin went out to schools no doubt refuels hooks
    Of evil that took a legal image and feeble scrimmage lame reality became
    A fatality, shower at night with the power of sight and my brain
    Towers like flight I’m plain ;wicked yall need a plane ticket to tame
    The skies of my knowledge fiddle lyrics nice in the period of life
    My vapors intruques like the papers of colleagues remarks are nice
    Spit particles rude and my articles include clinical cases and
    General races with cars on dragstrips my dewrag slips in my hand
    A bringer of a swell quote but as a singer held the note too long
    Rhymes make renowned sense like a crowned prince need a strong
    King’s throne so I put my bling on, my flow slam-dunk cities and
    Like program committees approve of authors, groove with proper plan
    Prostitution is the worse it can cause evolution of the universe understand
    My flavor be hot and high like tree tops, crews must share this the new
    Awareness, essential and brisk and potential exist so my goal is true
    Flow is friction in this rap coalition influence critical bodies like political
    Parties, forced to write and use a source of light and candlepower is pivotal
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This seemed to have a faster tempo than most of your pieces rhymebad, keep putting your own personal stamp on things.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya zooming through da maze while serving up a blaze never fade in da systematic motion
    flo on bruh
     
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