Black Poetry : sicksicksicks

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nia Maishani, Oct 1, 2002.

  1. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are a thorn in the side of morality
    an arrogant bully
    that perpetuates calamity

    destruction...
    that is your cause
    Alkebu-lan blood in your belly
    dark flesh remnants under your claws

    your fangs seek
    to masticate peace
    but the day is impending
    for evil to retreat

    your reign shall not last
    much longer
    your force is relentless
    but the Saviour's is stronger

    you stop at nothing
    short of profit
    your conscience is dull
    your dirty deeds thoughtless

    you capitalize
    off stolen
    innocent lives
    your primary target
    is blind sheep

    may the Good Shephard soon come
    and lead your defeat

    your criminal pathology
    has become predictable
    your offspring
    your spokespersons
    are equally despicable

    you train the weak
    to become agents
    of your malevolence
    to destroy their own
    just to proffer
    your inheritance

    you travel the planet
    bartering for souls
    in exchange for your deadly mark
    you cajole

    your harum scarum agenda exacted
    you proceed with deception
    coersion
    and fear tactics

    sending our people into a scare
    you manipulate their judgment
    just to win your evil share
    of souls
    yo
    the dole
    and woe
    is being sowed
    by the Foe

    knowing your days
    are numbered
    you multiply your agressions
    and threats
    unencumbered
    like a maniac
    that someone has cornered
    to deesculate your madness
    as a task seems enormous
    you act in haste
    fearing no time to waste
    and you aim for a maximum quota

    you will not win support
    from us who live for Good
    we see through our Third Eye
    with Truth understood

    I abhor your insidious emergence
    and I pray that the masses
    find your roguery deterrent

    you
    are
    none
    other
    than
    the
    devil
     
  2. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! Nia, this is such a SUPERB read, tyte, right, and RIGHTEOUS!!!!! Really an EXCELLANT read.
     
  3. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Dear Poetess Gaylee

    Your understanding and support are tremendously appreciated.

    Respect,

    Nia
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u took it up a notch i see and came out very righteously
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is a great piece
    you know i can feel this
    and this is a great portrait
    of the man

    you know i'm feeling this
    i've been feeling the 3rd I
    but now i can hear too with the 3rd ear

    peace poet

    DSS
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whewww! nia, this piece was truth! i loved the way that you put this heyah piece down. it flowed on so much truth, gah. thanks for sharin' this one heyah with us all.


    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again

    you have brung it. like So'ja said preciate this different view.



    One
     
  8. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yessirreebuddy! i'm lovin that!! i attempted to place myself into the head of the old evil one and wrote soemthing from him...sounds strange, but i think that it would be an interesting to post it here along side of this one...hmmm...perhaps i will...
     
  9. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    Ms Nia, Ms Nia,

    You are too insightful for words....but then again you aren't as you do put them down on the page so eloquently yet clear percise and straight to the point. I can learn so much from all of you. You (and others here on this site) are a window into my own place that I am trying to get to.

    Keep on writing and inspiring others to do the same
    Be Blessed
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Imagery!

    The imagery you use is stark but effective--I read every line just to see the picture--well done--Amun-Ra

    :)