Black Poetry : SECRECY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like an open statement

    to forever hold
    with secrets ya behind never told
    hidden like a mystery
    or some mental mold
    secrecy u say will not unfold
    someday one will face
    every secret dat taken place
    u sold me these lies
    i paid da price ,to stay or ride
    but i need to pick this bone
    forgive me if it seem too strong
    But them treasures secrets
    dat ya heart now hides
    and what da minds knows
    has told me loud & bold
    my my u sho is cold
    yo secrecy now uncovered
    didn't u know i am a bad mutha
    and one hot sensual lover
    yeah baby yo girl fell under da spell
    when she visit where i dewell
    told things between da screams
    on each moan secrets fade
    always remember a secret
    is not a secret if one soul knows
    yes trust and realism was there
    but once she was under my mesmerize care
    it was all about truth and dare
    i dared & she told da truth u busted it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, tis true, a secret isn't a secret if one other person knows it. But even with that, each person involved still has their own slant on it, not telling the whole truth. Can get complicated. Intricate write rich, do flow on.
     
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    your my little secret and thats how we should keep it. got me singing that exscape song love! nice write!
     
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    All things in the dark, shoul come t light..
    Nice drop $$Rich$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true watz often half truth always bring another lie but what seem
    a deep secret is revealed in due time . Thankz for the visit and continue love

    Nevar .....yes that song do come to mind and what is , is and will remain a secret...lol

    Thank u THEONE so true is will in time come to light
     
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    Venture deep in da night
    to unfold da secret light
    to find da truth of mystery
    and kill this secrecy
    from da myth i can not believe
    all da secrets up ya sleeve
    I thought it was and had to know
    uncovered like an bad show
    secrets is a bond but she told
    between da cums
    everything i wanted to hear
    sorry u busted my dear !

    secrets between two should remain one u let one in they will spill da beans everytime.....beware of secrecy !
     
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    Wow!

    This was fantastic.

    Read like a juicy story

    very cleverly posed, and creative.

    The ending....wow!
     
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    lol...sweets this was one i created and had some fun with because it open the doors to
    say we must beware who we reveal our secrets to because under the smoking gun often
    they will tell or like others they just won't stay quiet can't hold water ....u feel me !
    Thankz a million dear
     
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