Quiet Poetry Lounge : ONE DAY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, Jun 7, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One day
    the inner blind
    shall receive a
    mind.

    One day
    the silenced
    will gain
    a voice.

    One day
    the anger
    will be
    calmed.

    One day
    those in pain
    will no longer
    suffer.

    One day
    we all shall
    be given space
    to breathe.

    One day
    we all
    will be allowed
    our dreams.

    One day...
     
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    BOLOJOHNSON New Member MEMBER

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    :) YEAH THAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM DO YA THANG
     
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    longing and waiting for that one day!

    this is so inspirational! I actually exhaled at the thought of this day!
     
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    one day indeed !
    felt dis rumble through me and it gives hope
    of one day forth i wait ...
    tyte scribe poet
     
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    Hello James, :wave:

    Thank you so much!! Good to read you liked my poem!!

    Welcome to Destee!! I'm looking forward to reading your work!!

    ~Sierra~:)
     
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    Hi Purple,

    Me too, gurl!! I'm happy my poem inspired you in some way. Wouldn't that day be a wonderful blessing for us all!!

    ~Sierra~ :wave:
     
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    Hey Rich,

    I'm praying for that day!! I'm glad my poem gave you hope. Thanks so much for writing!! Much love to you!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    Hi Cindy,

    You have a beautiful way with words!! As one we can stand strong and wait for that day!!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    Sierra :) we are already making it happen, because together we are stronger.
    On your balancing beam, I am here to spot you... I will always catch you if you fall...
    I'm only a holler away. :)
    :heart:
    Making love happen from the knowledge of each other...
     
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    a blessin indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(exhaling again and loving the release! embracing the love felt here in this piece!