Black Poetry : My Package On The Shelf

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  1. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Package On The Shelf -

    This package on the shelf is fine
    Within has all the right mass and studied lines

    Intellegent and strong
    Oh you can't go wrong

    As it is what you say all studies show you seek
    But no one's buyin and buyers lookin pretty weak

    I have all the advertizing showin it's flow
    and when they judge it from afar, it's avoidance... fa show

    Seems what lies within this container
    Is not beeing seen, so all that's left in the remainder

    Is me , wondering what's wrong with this
    But it isn't me....and no that's not a diss

    I just have to scrutinize my market better
    And my buyer will see, that this can work it and wet her

    Appetite, and that this is what she's been really hopin to find
    This package is something really right on time
    This package with love within and kind
    This package that was made by love you see
    This package with infinite quality
    Was designed in time
    With you in mind

    And it cost you nothing as like the air and the tree
    was designed by God and is 100% free

    PS: Just from the mind of a Coporate Thug
    That Nisa from this board said ....just needs a hug

    lol

    Peace.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you posed this poet, and the ending made me smile. :) Sometimes we have be extra careful about who gets to open the package and discover all the treasures inside.
     
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    love the flow poet flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte by design
    like fine wine and some
    flow on ....lovin da flava .
     
  5. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks


    Very true...we do have to be careful and about who we allow to open that package.

    I do know this much....ya'll keep playin and this package is gonna have dust on it lol. Cob webs and stuff....spiders with long white beards.
     
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    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich and Nevar as well for the kind words.
     
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