Black Poetry : My Package On The Shelf

[LovNThySoul]

My Package On The Shelf -

This package on the shelf is fine
Within has all the right mass and studied lines

Intellegent and strong
Oh you can't go wrong

As it is what you say all studies show you seek
But no one's buyin and buyers lookin pretty weak

I have all the advertizing showin it's flow
and when they judge it from afar, it's avoidance... fa show

Seems what lies within this container
Is not beeing seen, so all that's left in the remainder

Is me , wondering what's wrong with this
But it isn't me....and no that's not a diss

I just have to scrutinize my market better
And my buyer will see, that this can work it and wet her

Appetite, and that this is what she's been really hopin to find
This package is something really right on time
This package with love within and kind
This package that was made by love you see
This package with infinite quality
Was designed in time
With you in mind

And it cost you nothing as like the air and the tree
was designed by God and is 100% free

PS: Just from the mind of a Coporate Thug
That Nisa from this board said ....just needs a hug

lol

Peace.

 

[watzinaname]

I like the way you posed this poet, and the ending made me smile. Sometimes we have be extra careful about who gets to open the package and discover all the treasures inside.

 

[nevar]

love the flow poet flow on.

 

[$$RICH$$]

this was tyte by design
like fine wine and some
flow on ....lovin da flava .

 

[LovNThySoul]

Thanks

I like the way you posed this poet, and the ending made me smile. Sometimes we have be extra careful about who gets to open the package and discover all the treasures inside.

Very true...we do have to be careful and about who we allow to open that package.

I do know this much....ya'll keep playin and this package is gonna have dust on it lol. Cob webs and stuff....spiders with long white beards.