Black Poetry : justanuvvadei

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Jan 4, 2003.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the sun rose
    and it was day
    the moon replaced the sun
    and it was night
    folks lived
    folks died
    folks partied
    went to church
    did their thang
    i mean
    it was just another day

    since i don't have to
    teach nobody
    the days been running into each other
    and they are
    all mixed up and confused
    and so am i
    cuz i thought
    it was just another day

    the difference was
    "the best of 2002"
    "the 50 greatest of 2002"
    "the 1billion countdown to 2002"
    and the folks that would make money
    off celebrations
    just like all the other holidays
    that only mean something
    if you want them to
    or if you are
    financially conscious

    a new year will mean something
    if you really need something symbolic
    that allows you to let go of your past
    that signifies a change in your life

    but for folks like me
    who live day to day
    but sometimes
    who don't know
    what day it is
    or
    what time it is
    unless
    you ask someone who cares
    it's
    justanuvvadei

    the sun will shine
    and it will be day
    the moon will replace the sun
    and it will be night
    folks will live
    folks will die
    stuff will happen

    it's
    just
    another
    day
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u work it now
    coz from last year to dis year
    just another day !
    in da hood
     
  3. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the title and loved the writers edge
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a way to say...just another day!

    This was great, loved the style and the flow! And had to let you know!
    Keep on keeping on!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  5. Blkthunder

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    "but for folks like me
    who live day to day
    but sometimes
    who don't know
    what day it is
    or
    what time it is
    unless
    you ask someone who cares
    it's
    justanuvvadei "

    Thats me all day...
    I feel you
    very nice