Black Poetry : ........In the Beggining

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ……….. In the beginning

    There was the word.
    And the word flowed like a sweet symphony of rhythms and rhymes.
    Caressing your every thought, stimulating the very essence of your soul reaching deep inside and pulling out your very heartbeat.
    seeping into your spirit like a warm mist.
    Nothing before
    Everything after
    Darkness became light
    Light shined like gold
    And the sky opened up and poured out :
    The Word
    In the beginning ………..

    Natasha May 2001
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha

    Instead of one, you getz 2 thumbs up!

    This hea is tight - to death!!

    1 :heart: sista
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And indeed

    that word can do wonders with the soul. Isn't it amazing how one word of so many different words can affect the outlook on somone's perspective on things and life. this was nice. Not yet quite said. Allowing you to think of it as you like yets saying how it will make you feel regardless. I like that... :D
     
  4. 8th wonder

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    "seeping into your spirit like warm mist".....girlfriend...that was so beautiful!!!
    Thanks for this....

    8th Wonder
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poetess...lovin' the word usage and the flo of this piece, mos def.

    ~~inkdrops~~