Quiet Poetry Lounge : Fresh Fried Feelings!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fresh fried feelings I heard the vendor say,
    I got to be dreaming nothing comes that way!
    Fresh fried feelings, the vendor said again.
    I wiped my eyes and shook my head and he
    started his call right back up again.

    Fresh fried feelings The vendor would cry to
    everyone that passed him by. When it seemed
    no one knew what to do, I thought I would see
    just what was what. Fresh fried feelings I ask
    "What do you mean?" He say it's the stuff that
    makes these people so mean.

    Fresh fried feelings he continued to bellow, the
    tinge of his eyes were a deep , deep yellow.
    Hepatitis, is what I guessed, I must be dreaming
    or else I am possessed. No one is seeing this
    man but I...Why do they just pass him by!

    Fresh fried feelings he said somewhat low, and then
    he whispered "there is something you should know"
    They don't see me cause I am already dead. They could
    have helped me when I was alive, but each day they
    passed by instead.

    Fresh fried feelings the vendor did cry! Then why do I
    see you ? Is it only in my minds eye? Fresh fried feelings
    he started to moan, he replied cause you are the onlly
    one who knows how I feel, that is why to you I am real.
    Fresh fried feeling folks is mean to the core. Won't even
    help a old lady front of the grocery store.

    Fresh fried feeling folks ain't got time for no one else all
    they ever study about is they self!
    Fresh fried feelings he continued to cry!
    why , I asked over and over again why?
    "For whom much is given much is required"!
    was all that the vendor would say ....
    I reached out to touch his fading image
    But the Fresh fried feelings vendor had finally retired! bjs(c) 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done

    u laid this to canvas sweet:heart: :toast:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my Richness!

    Smiling big! Glad you like something I did!
    A word from you is like a poetic blessing
    Thank you Super Moderator!:toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very much welcome

    as i smile @ u wit gleam:toast: :)
     
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    uppin did one back
     
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    this was very moving poet flow on.:spinstar:
     
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